July 25, 2020 by Janet

Love’s Poetry

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creative writing, hearts, love, nuances, Poetry, weekend writing prompt, writing
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Nuances.

The rhythm slows,

Lights flicker,

A room once bright,

Is now dimly lit.

Hearts ache,

Bittersweet,

The pieces laid out,

Never seem to fit.

The clock races,

Time stands still,

A story ends,

But will never quit.

Weekend Writing Challenge: Nuance
Word Count: 38

Image by Myriam Zilles from Pixabay

23 Comments

gr8ful_collette July 25, 2020 at 8:44 PM

Wow, I like it!! Reminded me of an old relationship! Well done! 💕

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1. Janet July 25, 2020 at 8:57 PM
  
  Thanks Collette! Maybe one of mine too, haha!
  
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Rhen Laird July 26, 2020 at 3:11 AM

WOW!

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1. Janet July 26, 2020 at 7:55 AM
  
  😄😘❤
  
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thelonelyauthorblog July 26, 2020 at 10:33 AM

Gorgeous

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1. Janet July 26, 2020 at 12:00 PM
  
  Thank you
  
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Bill July 26, 2020 at 12:14 PM

Reminds me of song lyrics,
“You can check out any time you like
But you can never leave” —
nicely done. I enjoyed it.

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1. Janet July 26, 2020 at 12:21 PM
  
  Oh yes… one of my favorites. Thank you!
  
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Dale July 27, 2020 at 11:59 AM

Lovely!

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1. Janet July 27, 2020 at 12:01 PM
  
  Thank you!
  
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Poetry for Finding Meaning in the Madness July 28, 2020 at 7:07 PM

Liked it 🙂

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1. Janet July 28, 2020 at 7:08 PM
  
  Thank you 😊
  
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Moreblessing July 31, 2020 at 11:31 PM

So simple and beautiful! Love this

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1. Janet July 31, 2020 at 11:33 PM
  
  Thank you so much! 🙂
  
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The Eclectic Contrarian August 9, 2020 at 12:09 PM

Isn’t love a constant cycle?

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1. Janet August 9, 2020 at 12:10 PM
  
  It is!
  
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Aaliya fatma August 27, 2020 at 11:59 PM

Beautifully designed 💝💝

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1. Janet August 28, 2020 at 9:03 AM
  
  Thank you!
  
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everythingtips September 29, 2020 at 1:41 PM

such a wonderful poem! beautifully written, i love it!! thank you for sharing💞
Follow @everythingtips for tips and recommendations if interested! It would mean a lot to me!🥺🤍

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1. Janet September 29, 2020 at 5:13 PM
  
  Thank you, will do!
  
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poeticallyyours360 October 2, 2020 at 4:44 AM

Flowed beautifully like a waterfall seeking its ocean. with calmness and delight your voice was heard.

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1. Janet October 2, 2020 at 8:47 AM
  
  Wow, thank you. What a beautiful compliment. 🥰
  
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2. poeticallyyours360 October 2, 2020 at 10:56 AM
  
  you surely are welcome! It was a treat to read!
  
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