Free at Sea

Day after day,

He drenched her with love,

And she was nothing but cavalier.

He tried and he tried,

But to no avail,

Until his breaking point was near.

She woke one day,

To find he had gone,

She had driven him from his turf.

He stood and he stared,

As the waves crashed down,

Then he smiled… as it was time to surf.


Word Count: 64

Sammi Cox Weeking Writing Challenge: Cavalier in 64 Words


I wanted to share my newest photography art… “The Surfer,” and decided to take on the weekend writing challenge—using the word cavalier—at the same time. It wasn’t easy, but I’m glad I was able to get it together and add some humor to the lad in the colorful sea.

I guess you could say that he made the best of a bad situation.

Peace & Love!!


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9 responses to “Free at Sea”

  1. Stine Writing Avatar

    Great poem and great picture.

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    1. Janet Avatar

      Thank you!

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  2. Rhen Laird Avatar
    Rhen Laird

    Good job–both art and poem! I love the final line 🙂

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    1. Janet Avatar

      Thank you Z!

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    2. Rhen Laird Avatar
      Rhen Laird

      Most welcome always!!

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  3. gr8ful_collette Avatar
    gr8ful_collette

    Dreaming of being alive and free in the waves of life 😊💕

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    1. Janet Avatar

      Yes! 😘❤

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  4. Just Teri Avatar

    Lady, is there nothing you can’t do??❣️
    ❤️🤗

    Inspires finding our own release.

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    1. Janet Avatar

      Thank you Teri! 😘❤

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